A mish-mash of Romance and Nuttiness, a corollary of my random ravings and momentary musings about love, life and everything nice.. :)

Tuesday, July 3, 2012

That Moment...



This wait is filling the void in my heart with a purpose, a direction. It is giving me the sustenance to battle it out in this hard clime. It provides me with the courage to face the demons of my past and my present. In those shadowy hours, in each of those harsh moments, I keep myself centered thinking only of that glorious moment- the happiest moment that I have had in days, or rather, in months. The darkest hours, when every minute of existence seems like unbridled torture to the extent that I can take no more of it, is upon me; but I cling on in fervent hope dreaming of that moment which would come to pass in a few days. That wondrous moment, when I would see you again, when time as a whole would stop and you tread gingerly towards me with that beautiful smile playing on your lips. There would be thunderous showers pouring all around, with the monsoon at its peak. Every drop of rain on you would sparkle like a diamond set in the radiance of a blazing flame. The wind would be playing a symphony with your dark,lustrous hair. You would gracefully brush them away from your pretty face like the wind blows those dark clouds away from the face of the glowing moon in the night sky. Your eyes, on seeing me would twinkle in recognition, like the stars greeting the moon, with renewed love and dainty shyness, after the heart-breaking parting which occur every dawn. As you tread those few remaining steps towards me, I would restrain the multitude of emotions running through my mind to savor the innate beauty of that single moment. I would shut myself from every other feeling, every other emotion, so that I could gaze into those solemn, deep eyes and hold you close to me- never to let go, never to let go ever again.

26 comments:

  1. a good one to read! wishing you the luck of embracing that moment soon :)

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    1. Thanks a ton Anamika.. Even I am waiting for it..:) Thanks for the comment as well..:)

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  2. Dear Hari,

    Here’s something I want to give you. You deserve it.
    Congrats !!!

    Here it lies http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/07/morning-gift.html

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    1. Anupam ..My Dear Bro...Thanks a ton... Was too preoccupied with my work..Thats y the Liebsters POst is not yet published..But thanks a million for my pehla Blog Award...Bro Hugs!!

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  3. beautifully penned touching post

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  4. Beautiful narration...Loved it :)

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  5. Hari,I love this!!! I love anything where words match the emotions that describe them. Seriously, I don't know how I missed visiting your blog. I tried to write something like this in another blog of mine ( though not as good as this). Do take a look http://meeratales.wordpress.com/2012/06/07/a-star-crossed-love/

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    1. OMG!!..Thanks ...THanks a ton Meera Di..You are one of my most favourite Bloggers whom I follow intently and to get such a truckload of praise from you is like a dream come true..Do keep following my humble blog and point out whatever needs correction. It feels great to have someone of your stature even comment on my humble post.
      Thank you , Thank you Thank you once again!!

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  6. Leaves me with such a beautiful feeling! <3 <3
    Totally absorbed me !! :)
    Nice post.. loved it!!!!! :)

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    1. Hi Kinara... Thanks a Million...It means a hell lot to me...:)
      Loving the fact that you loved it!!..
      Keep posting and reading..Meanwhile leme chk out your Blog too..:)
      Thanks again!

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  7. Very beautiful post...Loved the way you narrated your feelings....Beautiful comparisons...

    and...Thanks for the lovely comment on my blog ^_^

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  8. Awwe... It's so wonderfully written... Your grip on the emotions was not loosen for even a second. Very nice.

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    1. :)..Thanks Crimson.. Writing from the heart always seems to work I guess..:)..Thanks for stopping by.Do visit often..:)

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  9. Beautiful writeup emotions described so tenderly

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    1. Thanks a million!..Keep supporting my humble blog Rajni!..

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    1. Aww..Thanks!.. Its always possible to remain young at heart Shovonji..Thanks for the comment!

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  11. The description of your beloved coming to meet you is simply mind blowing-never read a better one.

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    1. Oh Indu..:)... Thank You soo much..You have made my day!

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  12. Lovely, very happy for the girl with the beautiful moves ;)

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  13. This was a lovely read, definitely not from a hopeless romantic :D
    Great choice of words and narration . penned beautifully

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    1. Aww..Thanks a ton Reshmi.. Thoovanathumbikal inspired aayatha..:D

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