A mish-mash of Romance and Nuttiness, a corollary of my random ravings and momentary musings about love, life and everything nice.. :)

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

A Rush of Romance..

The rainy month of June always had a special place in his heart since he was a kid. He could keep looking at the falling raindrops for hours and listen to them whispering sweet nothings to him while sipping hot, steamy cups of Coffee. Life had been such a raucous, boisterous party for him until that point when a breeze of fresh life wafted into his life.
It was a carefree, monsoon evening like any, but it turned out to be the greatest gift that the wonderful journey called life bestowed upon him. After-hours  at his beloved Alma Mater was his favourite time to wander listlessly and bask in the profound stillness that reverberates from the deep confines of his college. Maybe, it was this ethereal beauty of his quaint campus that he loved so dearly.
The sound of a peppy Indian song coming from behind the closed doors of the activity room in the main building, was an aberration to his perfect sojourn. Curious, he just peeked inside and saw the college dance team practising for an upcoming cult fest.
Then he saw her as if for the first time. Well, not exactly for the first time. You see they had been in the same class for like 2 years until that point but were miles apart in their hang-out groups. But Destiny is such a Naughty Kid-She just mixes up the most seemingly-different persons’ together and waits from the side-lines to see how their lives would pan out.
However, for him that was THE MOMENT. A wondrous moment when the whole wide world stood still- there were violins in the air (really there were) and butterflies in the stomach. The first moment when he looked into her wonderful eyes-it was THE MOMENT when he lost all his cool and confidence and he bumbled about like a baby and asked her something really out-of-context  to which she simply smiled.
That one smile was only a prelude to what would pan out in the following years. That one smile which took his breath away, those shining, big, innocent eyes- the overwhelming feel of consideration and caring that he feels whenever he looks into those deep, pearly orbs;  the nonchalance and the graceful elegance with which her body danced to the music-(Poetry in motion!); the healing  quality of the base notes of her mystical voice which could portray the essence of a thousand feelings, the melancholic disposition which makes him want to change the whole world and wage a war against whomsoever is responsible for her tears; those clear, sparkling, tinkling little giggles which are like the rush of a mountain spring.

Every single waking moment he wants to love her more. .And even More...


  1. Nice one :) Was imagining the whole set of events with you as the "he" walking through the corridors of my college as i read through. Even saw the glow in "his" face :) Wishing "him" all the best in his life. hope you get to be, who you Wannabe :)

  2. awesome interesting topic. THE writer inside hari comes out..never imagined such deep talents were inside you. forget about thesis and keep writing!hehe ..enjoy:)waiting for the full story to unfold..

  3. athe athe..baaki story poratte.. :)

  4. swear, I almost smelled the rain! You are good, didn't knw you had it in you..A first person approach would have been nicer though. Keep writing, never be pretentious, let it be simple and direct from the heart. :)all the best

  5. @HE:awesome..kidu..suprbb....she is lucky to have such a sweeet darling 'He'...:)waiting to read more about 'HE' and 'SHE'...:)

  6. may be coz it came from you, or may be coz u made a few colg memories to pop up in mind, or may be coz of the "But Destiny is such a Naughty Kid-She just mixes up the most seemingly different people together and waits from the sidelines to see how their lives would pan out",,, dunno exactly why..... I liked it... :)...
    ഒരു നല്ല ending കൂടെ കൊടുക്കാന്മേലാരുന്നൊ... :)... ശ്ശൊ പ്രണയം ഇങ്ങനെ എല്ലാരെയും എഴുത്തുകാരാക്കിക്കൊണ്ടിരിക്കുവാണല്ലൊ... ഇനിയും എഴുത് കെട്ടൊ... അപ്പുറത്തെ tab-il http://www.thefreedictionary.com/ തുറന്ന് വച്ച് കഷ്ടപ്പെട്ടാണെങ്കിലും ഞാന്‍ വായിക്കും.. :D... :).. എന്നും വെച്ച് എല്ലാരും പറയുന്ന കേട്ട് എപ്പൊഴും എപ്പൊഴും എഴുതാന്‍ ശ്രമിച്ചു ബോറാക്കല്ലേ... എഴുതാന്‍ തോന്നുമ്പോള്‍ മാത്രം എഴുതിയാല്‍ മതി... u will certainly have plenty of readers for ur blog, for sure.... :)...

  7. "He could look at the falling raindrops for hours and listen to them whispering sweet nothings to him while sipping hot steamy cups of Coffee.".... i loved this.. and i loved the way you wrote about her.. all of it.. "those deep, pearly orbs".."the mystical quality of the base notes of her healing voice which can portray the essence of a thousand feelings".. and knowing her, and knowing her music, i totally know what you are talking abt. And you put it so beautifully here. Nice work bro..

    And above all, i love the beauty of your love. Just like a sweet poem..

  8. if i were a girl, i would want to be THAT GIRL. It was that good.
    'But Destiny is such a Naughty Kid' wow. marvelous. write more frequently bud. you have an audience to cater to. :)

  9. wonderful daaa... keep writing...

  10. hey nice touch..and liked the way u describe that first scene..u can write a thousand words about how u first met her and sometimes they don't seem enough..u feel there are still memories which have been left out...hehe so I can understand where the violins and tulips came from..liked ur description..keep writing..

  11. wow!! u write way better than i do!! the description of every single detail. hats off

    1. Thanks Sneha.. I am giggling due to the overdose of compliments..:D